The feedback I received on the second elevator pitch was more positive that the one I received on the first elevator pitch. I slowed myself down while talking and my audience did understand my business idea better.
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The overall statements are true for me. I am not nervous about standing in front of a camera and I do know my pitch by heart now. I just tried on this one to not move my hands that much and in the overall, I am confident about this one.
Alexandro, I definitely feel like your pitch has improved. It is really impressive that you have memorized your pitch as it has a lot of complicated elements to it. You really worked on speaking slower and enunciating your words which really allows for the audience to follow along more intently. I definitely am impressed by how much your pitch has become so uniform and detailed.
I think your pitch has improved a lot since your first pitch. You slowed down how you were speaking which made you look less nervous and more confident. You are confident about this one and it really shows! Great work!
Alexandro, I have seen some fantastic leaps of improvement in your speeches thus far. You definitely have slowed down your speech, which will allow people in your audience to better understand you. Additionally, you did a great job not coming off as being nervous in your presentation. You now come across as a confidant entrepreneur. Overall, fantastic work yet again.
Alexandro,
ReplyDeleteI definitely feel like your pitch has improved. It is really impressive that you have memorized your pitch as it has a lot of complicated elements to it. You really worked on speaking slower and enunciating your words which really allows for the audience to follow along more intently. I definitely am impressed by how much your pitch has become so uniform and detailed.
I think your pitch has improved a lot since your first pitch. You slowed down how you were speaking which made you look less nervous and more confident. You are confident about this one and it really shows! Great work!
ReplyDeleteAlexandro,
ReplyDeleteI have seen some fantastic leaps of improvement in your speeches thus far. You definitely have slowed down your speech, which will allow people in your audience to better understand you. Additionally, you did a great job not coming off as being nervous in your presentation. You now come across as a confidant entrepreneur. Overall, fantastic work yet again.